My Response to Dylan's Post for Week of October 14th

 What's up, Dylan? I ended up writing about very similar things in my own blog, so I definitely agree with your point that the peer editing was very helpful. Someone else looking at your paper can reveal some mistakes that you never would have seen otherwise. I also liked looking at another paper because I could see how others interpreted the same prompt as me in unique ways.

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